Tuesday, 19 November 2013
Tuesday, 12 November 2013
Script: First Draft
Trailer Script
Dear Lucy
Dear Lucy
By Nicole, Sophie and Sam
Cast:
Lucy
Ben
Amy
Luke
Social worker- Lorraine
*Shows the foster home, camera tilts up as if it is being viewed from Lucy's perspective*Amy
Luke
Social worker- Lorraine
*panning of the scenery ( dull, dreary)*
Social worker: 'Hello, you must be Lucy, welcome to Five Rivers Foster Home, would you like to come in?
*Camera in front walking in front of Lucy walking into the foster home, she puts her bag down and walks into the living room*
Ben: "Hi i'm Ben"
Lucy: *smiles*
Ben: I hate it here, why did you want to come?
Lucy: I didn't really have a choice
Ben: Come on, I'll show you where I like to get away
Lucy: 'This is magical'
(CAPTION)- "A film that will melt your heart"
Social worker: Lucy, we have found you a foster family! They will be here in them morning!
Lucy: i'm being fostered Ben, i'm being picked up tomorrow
VOICEOVER- Ben: "I thought that was the end, I thought i'd never see her again"
(CAPTION) 'who knew it would be the start of something else'
Ben: 'I think this belongs to you'
Lucy; Thank you
Ben: Lucy Woods? Is it you? Its me, Ben Enright, from the foster home? three rivers?
(CAPTION) 'Two childhood sweet hearts reunited'
Lucy: Oh..yes..hello, i didnt recognise you
Ben: well it has been 8 years, we should go for a coffee? to catch up on all these years?
Lucy: well, I'm actually just on my way to meet my boyfriend so..swap numbers and i'll ring you
Ben: erm yeah okay sounds good. have fun
Ben: 'you never called'
Lucy: 'Sorry, i thought you was going to ring me'
(CAPTION)- THIS SUMMER
Lucy: (to a friend) 'we have so much history, he was my first love but now i've found him hes not going to go without a fight'
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Joe Enright'- cuts to picture of him
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Sophie Jones'- cuts to picture of him
Lucy: 'you cant just walk back into my life and expect it to go back to the way it was before, its different now'
Ben: 'being apart has made me realised that she hasn't changed. She's still my Lucy'
Ben:- 'Lucy I need to see you'
Lucy: this is harder than i thought
Ben: 'what is'
Lucy: you and me getting along after all these years when i have James
Lucy: Thank you for a good night
Lucy: 'me finding you has just caused so much drama and chaos, i just want to be happy'
Ben: 'you can with me..Lucy 'i'll wait for you, i'm sorry'
Lucy: 'i'll see you tomorrow'
Ben: 'same time and place'
James: ' I know you want him, just be honest and stop lying!'
Lucy: ' I don't know what I want'
*Lucy screams*
(CAPTION)- 'distance makes the heart grow fonder'
Tuesday, 5 November 2013
Shotlist (Including Stage Directions)
*TRACKING SHOT* - Shows Lucy pulling up at the foster home looking out the passenger seat car window up at the home
*TILT UP SHOT*- Shows the foster home, camera tilts up as if it is being viewed from Lucy's perspective
*PANNING* of the scenery ( dull, dreary)
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy's facial expression, sad
Sound of door opening and dialogue of social worker smiling *CUTAWAY SHOT* Lucy walks through the door, fades to black
CAPTION: (wipes in from the left) "From the directors of The Runaway and Commitment to love" (fades out)
*TRACKING* camera in front walking in front of Lucy walking into the foster home, she puts her bag down and walks into the living room
*MIDSHOT* of Lucy looking ahead, then *CUTS* to Lucy looking up from her book *TILT DOWN* as from Ben's point of view
(CAPTION)- "A film that will melt your heart"
*VERY WIDE SHOT* and *SLOW ZOOM* into Ben and Lucy running around the trees
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* Both speaking again
(CAPTION AS THEY CONTINUE TO SPEAK)
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* Social worker comes into Lucy's room and tells her she is being fostered
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy looking sad
*MID SHOT* of Lucy telling Ben she is being fostered
*VOICEOVER OF BEN* "I thought that was the end, I thought i'd never see her again"
*WIDE SHOT & TRACKING* of Lucy being driven away
(CAPTION) 'who knew it would be the start of something new'
*CLOSEUP AND TRACKING* Of Lucy writing in her diary, shows the date
*WIDE SHOT* of Lucy walking her dog and sitting on the bench, Lucy writing in her diary
*TRACKING SHOT OF DOG RUNNING OFF*
*MID & TRACKING SHOT* of Lucy running after the dog, calling her
*QUICK CUT AND CLOSE UP* of the diary being left
*TRACKING SHOT* of Ben reading and *CLOSE UP* of him looking up as Lucy shouts after the dog
*TRACKING SHOT* of Lucy walking out the park with the dog and bag
*MID SHOT* of Ben running after Lucy
*CLOSE UP* of Ben handing Lucy the diary
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy saying thank you, then Ben looks down and see's her name on the front *CLOSE UP* of his confused face
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* of Ben
(CAPTION) Two childhood sweet hearts reunited
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT of Lucy
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* of Ben
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* Of Lucy
* MID SHOT* Ben: -face drops-
*MID SHOT* of Ben
*CLOSE UP* 'of Lucy
(CAPTION)- THIS SUMMER
*CLOSE UP* Lucy- speaking to her friend about Ben
*WIDE SHOT* Of Ben and James fighting
*MIDSHOT* Of Lucy hugging Ben and crying
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Joe Enright'- cuts to picture of him
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Sophie Jones'- cuts to picture of him
*MID SHOT* of Lucy
*CLOSE UP* Ben with his head in his hands
*MID SHOT* of ben speaking to a friend
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* 'of Ben
*WIDE SHOT* then *MID SHOT* of them in the restaurant speaking
*MID SHOT* Lucy thanking Ben for a good night and he kisses her on the cheek
**CLOSE UP AND TRACKING* of Lucy writing in her diary again about her day
*MID SHOT* Of Ben and another boy fighting
*CLOSE UP* Of lucy
OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT* of ben
*CLOSE UP OF HER SMILING*
*CLOSE UP* Ben
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy crying
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* of Ben speaking to Lucy on the phone
*WIDE SHOT and TILT ANGLE* of Lucy giggling on the bed
*MIDSHOT* of them watching a film
*MIDSHOT* of them walking the dogs, holding hands
*MIDSHOT* of them having their first kiss
*MIDSHOT* of them cuddling on the sofa
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* of them kissing and holding hands
(CAPTION) 'distance makes the heart grow fonder'
*TILT UP SHOT*- Shows the foster home, camera tilts up as if it is being viewed from Lucy's perspective
*PANNING* of the scenery ( dull, dreary)
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy's facial expression, sad
Sound of door opening and dialogue of social worker smiling *CUTAWAY SHOT* Lucy walks through the door, fades to black
CAPTION: (wipes in from the left) "From the directors of The Runaway and Commitment to love" (fades out)
*TRACKING* camera in front walking in front of Lucy walking into the foster home, she puts her bag down and walks into the living room
*MIDSHOT* of Lucy looking ahead, then *CUTS* to Lucy looking up from her book *TILT DOWN* as from Ben's point of view
(CAPTION)- "A film that will melt your heart"
*VERY WIDE SHOT* and *SLOW ZOOM* into Ben and Lucy running around the trees
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* Both speaking again
(CAPTION AS THEY CONTINUE TO SPEAK)
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* Social worker comes into Lucy's room and tells her she is being fostered
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy looking sad
*MID SHOT* of Lucy telling Ben she is being fostered
*VOICEOVER OF BEN* "I thought that was the end, I thought i'd never see her again"
*WIDE SHOT & TRACKING* of Lucy being driven away
(CAPTION) 'who knew it would be the start of something new'
*CLOSEUP AND TRACKING* Of Lucy writing in her diary, shows the date
*WIDE SHOT* of Lucy walking her dog and sitting on the bench, Lucy writing in her diary
*TRACKING SHOT OF DOG RUNNING OFF*
*MID & TRACKING SHOT* of Lucy running after the dog, calling her
*QUICK CUT AND CLOSE UP* of the diary being left
*TRACKING SHOT* of Ben reading and *CLOSE UP* of him looking up as Lucy shouts after the dog
*TRACKING SHOT* of Lucy walking out the park with the dog and bag
*MID SHOT* of Ben running after Lucy
*CLOSE UP* of Ben handing Lucy the diary
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy saying thank you, then Ben looks down and see's her name on the front *CLOSE UP* of his confused face
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* of Ben
(CAPTION) Two childhood sweet hearts reunited
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT of Lucy
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* of Ben
*OVER SHOULDER SHOT* Of Lucy
* MID SHOT* Ben: -face drops-
*MID SHOT* of Ben
*CLOSE UP* 'of Lucy
(CAPTION)- THIS SUMMER
*CLOSE UP* Lucy- speaking to her friend about Ben
*WIDE SHOT* Of Ben and James fighting
*MIDSHOT* Of Lucy hugging Ben and crying
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Joe Enright'- cuts to picture of him
CAPTION OF BEN WITH THE CHARACTER INTRODUCTION 'Sophie Jones'- cuts to picture of him
*MID SHOT* of Lucy
*CLOSE UP* Ben with his head in his hands
*MID SHOT* of ben speaking to a friend
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* 'of Ben
*WIDE SHOT* then *MID SHOT* of them in the restaurant speaking
*MID SHOT* Lucy thanking Ben for a good night and he kisses her on the cheek
**CLOSE UP AND TRACKING* of Lucy writing in her diary again about her day
*MID SHOT* Of Ben and another boy fighting
*CLOSE UP* Of lucy
OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT* of ben
*CLOSE UP OF HER SMILING*
*CLOSE UP* Ben
*CLOSE UP* of Lucy crying
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* of Ben speaking to Lucy on the phone
*WIDE SHOT and TILT ANGLE* of Lucy giggling on the bed
*MIDSHOT* of them watching a film
*MIDSHOT* of them walking the dogs, holding hands
*MIDSHOT* of them having their first kiss
*MIDSHOT* of them cuddling on the sofa
*MEDIUM CLOSE UP* of them kissing and holding hands
(CAPTION) 'distance makes the heart grow fonder'
Monday, 4 November 2013
Sunday, 3 November 2013
Images of our Main Characters
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| Younger Lucy (Amy) |
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| Older Lucy (Sophie) |
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| Older Ben (Joe) |
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| Younger Ben (James) |
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