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Updated and final script

Trailer Script 

Dear Lucy

By Nicole, Sophie and Sam

Cast:

Lucy

Ben

Amy

James

*Titles of SSN productions*

*Camera pan from right to left- shows Lucy being dropped off in the car to the foster home*

*Voiceover of Lucy*- 'i was just 10 years old when i moved into a foster home'

*Camera in front with Lucy walking towards it, with her suitcase going into the foster home*

*Lucy walking through the gates of the foster home holding her toy* 

*Lucy and Ben running up the road*- VOICEOVER OF LUCY: 'And thats where i met my best friend Ben'

*Ben and Lucy walking through a field laughing together*

*Lucy and Ben having a play fight with stuffed toys*

*Ben chasing Lucy through the field*

*Ben and Lucy reading a book, Ben taps Lucy to show her a funny part of his book* Voiceover of Lucy- ' I couldn't imagine my life without him'

*Ben and Lucy running up the road holding hands*

TITLES- 'From the director of Remember Me'

Lucy: "I'm being fostered and i'm moving away"

*Lucy and Ben hug* - VOICEOVER OF LUCY: 'we promised to write to each other'

*Lucy goes off in the car and Ben waves at the side of the road*

*Ben looks sad and walks up the stairs*

*Ben looks through and finds Lucy left her diary here*

*Ben writing a lesson to Lucy*- VOICEOVER OF BEN; "Dear Lucy"

*Lucy writing a letter back to Ben*- VOICEOVER OF LUCY: "Dear Ben"

*Lucy posting the letter to Ben*- VOICEOVER OF LUCY: "Im missing you"

*Older Ben comes into the trailer, knocks on Lucy's door*

*Lucy opens the door and sees Ben*- VOICEOVER OF LUCY: ' i never thought i'd see him again'

*Close up of Ben holding Lucy's diary*

*Lucy and Ben sitting down speaking*- Lucy: "I think you're a bit too late"

*Extreme close up of Lucy's wedding ring*

*Close up of a text conversation- Lucy saying to Ben 'I'm sorry... i should have told you earlier'

*Ben on the phone arguing with Lucy* and Voiceover of Lucy; "I didn't mean to hurt him but i just couldn't escape the truth' 

*Mid-shot of Lucy and her friend- her friend says 'I know you're married but you can't give up on Ben'

*Lucy rings Ben but he declines the call*

*Midshot of Lucy on the phone to Ben saying ' when can I see you again'

*Mid-shot of Ben talking to Lucy and saying 'You need to make a decision'

*Lucy takes off her wedding ring and throws it on the table*

*Ben gets upset and throws the picture of him and Lucy into the fire*

*Titles of 'Dear Lucy' and background image is the younger version reading a book*

*Title of 'coming soon' with the younger version of Ben writing in the background*

CREDITS

Final Cut

Peer Assessment Comments: Good and Bad Points

Things we have done well:

1. The plot was clear
2. The music is appropriate to the plot
3. The music is good 
4. The camera is always in focus
5. Most shots look very professional 
6. Narrative and genre is clear. 
7. Music fits very well
8. Tagline is very good
9. All of the songs really complimented the genre
10. Story was very clear
11. Editing was very good
12. Clear genre

Targets

1. Some of the voiceovers need redoing to sound more clear
2. Need a voiceover for clips of kids running at the beginning
3. Voice overs
4. The pause at the end was very long, shorten it?

Evaluation Question 4: How did you use digital technologies in the construction and research planning and evaluation stages?

Evaluation Question 3: What have you learnt from audience feedback?

Evaluation Question 2: How effective is the combination of your main task and ancillary task?

Evaluation Question 1: In what ways does your media products use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

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