Tuesday, 17 December 2013

Ancillary Draft 1: Feedback

We presented our first draft of our ancillary task to the class today. We showed them our poster and our feedback was as followed;

- Put 'Dear Lucy' on one line rather than two
- Either put the older actors on the poster or both, not just younger
- Make the tag line bigger
- Take the writing paper off of James' face

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