Tuesday, 17 December 2013

Further Changes to our Plot

We have made a slight change to the plot of our film, which will affect the script for our film trailer. Below is a rough idea of our new plot:
  • Lucy moves into foster home
  • She meets a boy called ben, soon becoming best friends
  • Lucy gets fostered and soon moves away
  • Ben and Lucy promise to write to each other and to not lose contact
  • Ben finds Lucy's diary that she left at the foster home
  • Lucy does write to him 
  • He slowly begins to realise that he has to move on and faces the fact that Lucy doesn't want to speak to him anymore.
  • 10 years on, Ben decides he will return Lucy's diary to her. He returns the diary to the address inside and is shocked to see Lucy's face appear at the front door
  • She opens the door and is shocked to see him
  • Lucy invites him in and they speak
  • Lucy tells Ben he is too late to make things work because she is married
  • Ben is upset and starts to ignore Lucy's calls
  • He throws the picture of them as younger kids into the fire
  • They argue over the phone and agree to meet up
  • They get on and cuddle on the sofa
  • Lucy tells Ben that she is going to leave her husband
  • Lucy takes off her ring 
  • They build on their relationship and the trailer ends them together

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