Tuesday, 28 January 2014

Script: Second Draft


Trailer Script 

Dear Lucy

By Nicole, Sophie and Sam

Cast:

Lucy

Ben


Amy


*Titles of SSN productions*

*Camera pan from right to left- shows Lucy being dropped off in the car to the foster home*

*Voiceover of Lucy*- 'i was just 10 years old when i moved into a foster home'

*Camera in front with Lucy walking towards it, with her suitcase going into the foster home*

*Lucy walking through the gates of the foster home holding her toy* 

*Lucy and Ben running up the road*
VOICEOVER OF LUCY: 'And thats where i met my best friend Ben'

*Ben and Lucy walking through a field laughing together*

*Lucy and Ben having a play fight with stuffed toys*

*Ben chasing Lucy through the field*

*Ben and Lucy reading a book, Ben taps Lucy to show her a funny part of his book*

*Ben and Lucy running up the road holding hands*

TITLES- 'Childhood sweethearts torn apart'

Lucy: "I'm being fostered and i'm moving away"

*Lucy and Ben hug* 
VOICEOVER OF LUCY: 'we promised to write to each other'

*Lucy goes off in the car and Ben waves at the side of the road*

*Ben looks sad and walks up the stairs*

*Ben looks through and finds Lucy left her diary here*

*Ben writing a lesson to Lucy*
VOICEOVER OF BEN; "Dear Lucy"

*Lucy writing a letter back to Ben*
VOICEOVER OF LUCY: "Dear Ben"

*Lucy posting the letter to Ben*
VOICEOVER OF LUCY: "Im missing you"

TITLES- 'time went on'

*Older Ben comes into the trailer, knocks on Lucy's door*

*Lucy opens the door and sees Ben*
VOICEOVER OF LUCY: ' i never thought i would see him again'

*Close up of Ben holding Lucy's diary*

*Lucy and Ben sitting down speaking*
Lucy: "I think you're a bit too late"

*Extreme close up of Lucy's wedding ring*

*Ben on the phone arguing with Lucy*

*Ben gets upset and throws the picture of him and Lucy into the fire*

*Lucy rings Ben but he declines the call*

*Lucy is on the phone to Ben eventually and agrees to meet up*

*Ben and Lucy cuddling on the sofa*

*Lucy and Ben on the bed* 
Lucy; "I'm going to leave him Ben"

*Lucy takes off her wedding ring and throws it on the table*

CAPTION:  (wipes in from the left) "From the directors of The Committment" (fades out)

*Flashback of Lucy and Ben as children walking through the field*

*Then Titles of 'Dear Lucy' with the background of the older version of Ben and Lucy walking down the road in the dark*

TITLES: '12th June 2014'

CREDITS


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