Peer Assessment Comments: Good and Bad Points

Things we have done well:

1. The plot was clear
2. The music is appropriate to the plot
3. The music is good 
4. The camera is always in focus
5. Most shots look very professional 
6. Narrative and genre is clear. 
7. Music fits very well
8. Tagline is very good
9. All of the songs really complimented the genre
10. Story was very clear
11. Editing was very good
12. Clear genre

Targets

1. Some of the voiceovers need redoing to sound more clear
2. Need a voiceover for clips of kids running at the beginning
3. Voice overs
4. The pause at the end was very long, shorten it?